That main melody is kind of a chliche of every other melody out there. The siren in the beginning is too loud. Synths need some eqing. Bass needs to be louder. The riser is the second buildup is too loud. The white noise release in the drops is too loud. Second drop is hella cool. Kinda wish the melody would change every now and then. Maybe add a second melody. It seems really repetitive. In the 3rd drop, the lead bass is stereo. Never make your basses stereo. Overall it was a cool idea, but the mixing needs a lot of work. If I'm being honest, I would have chose different PWM pads. Overall cool song, but mixing needs work.