FelixZophar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[For Them (NGRMC Remix)]

I didn't exactly like that long intro. I like it when it all came in at 1:08. That part was really nice. I loved that part with all the strings! I wish the melody where the violins came in just had some vibrato. I then like that big impact! It just lit up the whole song! I feel like an orchestra could play this! But there are still some flaws. But this was awesome!

SplatterDash responds:

Hey, thank you for reviewing this! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and that there were some good things I can improve on from this. I actually used some VSTs for the first time - the one with the strings was DSK Overture. I was still trying to get used to it when I was making this, so I didn't realize there were some knobs (like the vibrato) in certain areas. Hopefully I'll utilize them in later works :)

I've mentioned to ADR3-N that the reason why I had the long intro was because of a piece I was inspired by called Atlas. That piece can be found here: https://youtu.be/Bw2Up2BRRII I feel like I know now how to not make the intro as long, so in pieces like this I know now how to start it off good and short.

Again, thank you for judging this and for running NGRMC! Looking forward to coming back next year :D

[I Can Dream, And So Can You]

Well, not too bad. There is some stuff you do need to work on. You're off tempo, that's a major factor. And the mixing isn't that good. Besides that I liked the melodies they were really nice. I'd like to see this preformed at a piano concert. Not bad for a first song.

[An Anagram]

Well some parts are off scale but I like the rest. Nice job!

MRM3 responds:

Thank you!
I agree that some parts are off, I just can't figure out which ones.

[Yes (csx42 Remix)]

Wow. This is amazing! I didn't think it would be this good! :)

[H4D_2_G0 (NGRMC Remix)]

[ Official NGRMC Review ]

Awesome dude! I really liked this remix you did. I like that intro, and some of the glitchyness you did to the melody. I like the slow tempo, and the ending when it fades out and then comes back in. I just think the gitches were happening way too much. Maybe a few times. But not like ten.
Overall. Amazing! I like this! Continue your journey through music!
Thanks!
Zophar

GoodL responds:

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) I can see your point about the glitches being over the top. If we're being honest though, if I had it my way it would be even glitchier! But I can totally understand that not everyone would be super into that. Thanks again, this competition is really awesome and I'm happy to be a part of it.

[Dynamisis (NGRMC)]

[ Official NGRMC Review ]

This was a nice remix! I liked listening. Through this remix I saw a lot of improvement in you! You did a really nice job. But there are sill some cons though. I like that intro when it comes in. But I don't like the dry kick in the beginning. I wish you chose a more lowpass filtered kick. That buildup was nice. I like the drop and the sidechain.
Overall. Nice job! I thought that the kick wasn't a good kick. But that's okay. Your buildup does need some improvement. And instrument select. But nice job!
Thanks!
Zophar

MRM3 responds:

I do want to say that I have bad headphones, and so, my mixing is never how it sounds to me.
That being said...
I agree that I should have done a low-pass on the kick. I really don't like it either (I was able to listen to it on a different device after uploading it)
The buildup is trash, being honest.
I don't really know how to make a good riser, other than to automate the pitch of a sine note, and the freq. of a FM hi-passed noise sound.
Would there be a chance that I could make a few changes, and then re-submit it?
If so, then, Thanks!😁
-MRM3